Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Verdict


ITs been known for long
between you and me
and everybody else
Like you said so

and like i never acknowledged.

Some things -
we say and we forget
Some actions -
we do and we forget
Some grudges -
we hold and we loose
but Some feelings -
we keep and we transcend with.

I want to believe, I still...
but like the
image of a mirror
in the mirror
This is no verdict.

Wants & wishes do seldom suffice
The verdict is -
that of the vapours..
Either they fall on earth
or spread hues in sky.

(19-09-08)


Comments: (as received on orkut)
- Aamnah
Wonderful piece. Wise, elegant and so simple

- Ash
Fabulous write

- Philomel
interesting..i have a poem by the same name.

- Maulik
febulos and out of blue theme....
what a write here...
lalit bhai back with a bang bang bang .....

lovely dude..
superb composition

- Kshitij
makes for a good read..

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