Its an anomaly
there is too much of me with you
and too less of you with me.
I wont cry
this time i wont
I should have been used to..
To contain and
Dilute
My emotions.
.
.
.
And there is one more anomaly
next time i make a call
and talk to you
I'll forget the lesser part
of you with me and
will build upon the larger part
of me with you...
(07-05-08)
Comments: (as received on orkut)
Rohan
Good one...nice write...good command of language...wish u'd written more.
Scribbler
Brillaint stuff
Short yet stark
good one Bro
keep it rollin;)
Maulik
very well done bro...
magics again n again
Sashu
enjoyed it... neat write lalit
Bharat
Beautiful and articulate!
my blog says you put in two 2 more articles on ur blog.. is that true?? neways.. i never understand ur poems.. so cant comment on that.. njoi!! keep writing..
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